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能够简单的使用一些长句，但句法错误偏多；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些，还要加强单词拼写的检查。
a major disadvantage of advertise on television nowsday, as the media murtuty more people chose the tv to show there comdity or creative for us. in fact, show advertise on tv may be has some advantage,but it has more disadvantage. to show the advertise on tv would distriub people watch tv interest and make people annoy their show even hate it. and it has potiest danger if you invenment money or time but without affect. and then if you have a good idea, domodity or something is very well, so you doesn't to make a show. so you should go diffeerent way!
