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The Internet With the development of society,The Intenet has been spreaded all the world.But everything has tow sides,internet included.Everyone has his own opinins. some poeple think benefit their work and study.Beacause it makes them more efficiet.We can use the internet to do lots of complex and boring work.As a result,we will have more time to do some more important.However,there are also some people think it has a bad effect on children.For some teenagers are deeply addicted in it.It has take up their time.So they will pay less attention to study. In my opinion,I think every one shoud use the internet appropritely.
