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2010年专四作文真题:学生雇佣清洁工

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:48浏览次数:5301
要求:
题目 Should College Student Hire Cleaners?
说明 It was recently reported in a newspaper that six students who shared a dorm at a local university hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning once a week. And each of them paid her 60 Yuan a month. This has lead to a heated debate as to whether college students should hire cleaners. Should College Student Hire Cleaners?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是学术词汇使用较恰当。

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The Importance of Competition The law of the Jungle tells us that those who survive in the nature are invariably the winners in the competition; it also reveals the truth that competition is very important to us, so we should pay more attention to it. First of all, competition is an important way to urge people to beyond themselves. Without competition, there will be no challenges for us, and then we will hover in the same place and do not get any progress. For example, Mr. A and Mr. B are working in a same company and both of them are in the same situation, but Mr. B slackens himself and Mr. A practices this professional skills in his spare time from vary sources. Finally, Mr. A gets promotion but Mr. B still stands on the same level. It obviously shows that competition is of great importance. Secondly, competition is an effective way to boost oneself. Looking back to 2004 Olympic Games, Liu Xiang got the champion and broke the record; it relied on his rigid training and competed with others. Last but not least, competition makes people breed awareness of crisis. In a word, competition is important for us in that it keeps awareness of a crisis in our hearts and makes us get better.

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