2004年考研英语作文真题:终点又是起点

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What an enlightening and compelling cartoon it is!Depicted in the painting is a scenario which a man is running and reaches the destination,at the same time,back to the starting.Simple as it is,what the cartoonist attempts to convey to us is thought-provoking.Be not satisfied readily,to pursue further. Our life is just what the drawing conveys,taken as a running.The higher stage is what we go for inconsistently,that is,there is no destination in our lives.More exactly speaking,life is a marathon,A rest in the halfway is accepted,owing to our weary bodies.While it is just a short pause,even though walking,is a measure that we must take to the ending. Provided one day,we acheive our goals or succeed in one scope.You are tired and wounded when breaking through the throns.May be we will relax ourself and entertain to reward our bitter giving.Nevertheless,don't forget,there needs our new passion and energy to treat another new life.