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2010年6月英语六级作文真题:忽视中文学习

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:35浏览次数:2779
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题目 Due Attention Should Be Given To the Study of Chinese
要求
1.近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象;
2.出现这种现象的原因和后果;
3.我认为…
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Recently ,students are attaching great importance to the english studying ,howerve,ingoring the study of chinese, it is a pity to see that . because chinese is our mother tongue if we do not care for it .we will have nothing to pass on to our next generation . there are some main reasons for this phenomenons on the one hand . english is popular in all over the world .so many people sharing ideas by english , it is no doubt that if we want to keep peace with the development of the world .we wll spend more time to learn english well .meanwhile we will have show little enthusastics about the our mother tongue _ chinese ..on the other hand,our students work hard to learn maths . physics but not incluing the chinese in my opinion , our governments should start program to prompt students awarness to learn chinese well . or we nation will lose our excellent culture . and soon or later ,we nation culture will die away

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