雅思写作范文:父母应该多陪孩子

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Life becomes hard for many families in China. People have to work hard to earn money for their families. Parents have few time to be with their children. Ivan is 5-year-old. In his memory, his parents are busy. They seems have a lot of work to do. They go to work early and go home late. Ivan rarely sees his parents a day, even on the weekend. His parents want to earn more money. They believe that this is the way to give Ivan a good life. They ignore the needs of Ivan. There are many family like Ivan’s family in China. Parents spend few times with their children. They believe that economic is more important than involved in children’s development. Some of these children have personal flaw. Some of them have withdraw behavior. Some of them acting bad to attract attention of their parents. If parents ignore the needs of their children, these children might have behavior or mental problems. They might think that his parents do not like them. They might think that they did things wrong, because their parents did not speed time with them. To attract their parents attention, they might do some thing dangerous, like fighting, do things that their parents do not want them to do, and so on. Parents should involve in children’s life. They should be part of children’s life. They should be with their children as much as they can. Several hours a day might be enough for children. Parents can listen children. Parents can communicate with children. Listening the sounds from children heart. Parents then could guide their children. They could help children to realize mistakes. The more important thing is children could feel their parents love. With parents’ love, people will become a good person in the future. Therefore parents should spend as more time as possible to be with their children.