Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文中词汇表达灵活性要提高,希望能较熟练地使用学术词汇;可适当增加从句使用,注意极个别句子错误;衔接词较为不错,但文章结构不严谨。
Education Pays This is a chart which demonstrates the higher degree the higher income.Nowadays,the more people realize the knowledge is more and more important. From the chart,we can see the Doctoral degree earn 1551$ in 2011,the Bachelor's degree earn 1053$,but the high school diploma earn 719$,the less than high school diploma earn 451$.So,we can draw the conclusion that is the higher degree the higher wage.In this fierce compete of social,the knowledge decides you what your job and where to work.When you get a higher degree,it means that you can find a good job. As far as I am concerned,the knowledge has changed everything.So, we must study hard.In order to life is better.