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2010年专四作文真题:学生雇佣清洁工

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:48浏览次数:5301
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题目 Should College Student Hire Cleaners?
说明 It was recently reported in a newspaper that six students who shared a dorm at a local university hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning once a week. And each of them paid her 60 Yuan a month. This has lead to a heated debate as to whether college students should hire cleaners. Should College Student Hire Cleaners?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分74.5分
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能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;全文结构较为严谨;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

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One Way to Keep Our Information Safe As the development of the Internet, people in growing numbers prefer to find their jobs on the net, because in this way, the can find jobs conveniently, so they must send their self-identities to the net. But if you want to find jobs on the Internet, you should pay greater attention to protect your private information due to someone on the net may make use of your information. The best way to solve this problem is to look before you leap. Before you sending your meassage to this net, you should check authenticity of this webpage. If you offer your information to a webpage which is the company does not exist in reality, you might exposure your personal information, and you may be cheated by this webpage, because you offer you information to it ,but this webpage does not give your chance to interview, even it does not respond you. So we should be in an awareness of this situation. In a word, you should not offer your personal information to the webpage easily unless you absolutely sure of the authenticity of this webpage. If you are promising, you can go to this company in reality to ask some questions.

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