文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间,词汇表达灵活性也要提高,单词拼写错误较多。
At one time ,the use of disposal bag was continuedly increase with economic development.Because disposal bag is convenient for comsumer when they go shopping or packaging. At the same time,this behavior of the use of disposial bag cause serious enviroment problem which threaten survival circumstance.In addition,the plastic bag can't currupt,they spare our human sapce that cause our limited space becoming more deficency. For these reasons,we should take some action to limiting the use of disposal bag.At the begining,it can save the earth's resourse which is the movement of protecting the green enviroment;Secondly,we also can have more wide space to live in;Finally,reducing the incineration of plastic bag which lessen the air pollution.