2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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With the development of the society,computer is more and more important and many people stay at home all the day besides go to work,so online shopping is more popular. Now online shopping is a fashion way and it has many good aspects,however everything has good ways and it also has bad ways,online shopping included.so,let us talking about that.Online shopping can save much time.As for people who is lazy,I have to recognize it is a very perfect way,of course,there have goods more than in the market,but we can not see the real goods,it is realized we do not try by ourselves,so we don not know if it suitable with us and we have physical training when we go to market. I think we should go shopping to go to market when we have spare time.