2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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In morden society, all kinds of pressure filled in our daily life. People including children, adolescence, adult, even older people, feel pressure in their life.For children, they worry about the score of some examination.For adults, they worry about being fire and being replaced by advanced machine or other super work. In one word, everyone undertake some pressure. The feature of morden society cause the pressure,and i think it should not be fuss about this phenomenon.In my opinion, there are two main resource of the pressure.One of them is that with the development of technology, especially in mobilization machine. the same work needs fewer person,the lay off workers and unemployees have become a society problem,which will make people feel pressure and anxious. Another one is that for keep up with the development of high technology, people have to learn continually and hardly, otherwise you will be "out" Psychology health have induced more and more people's attention, there are many way to reduce the pressure.For example, many people like to do some exercise such as swimming , running , playing football and so on. The others like some quiet methods just like reading book , seeing film, listening songs and so on. The method varies form person to person, but everyone should find a effective method for himself to release the pressure and refresh himself for the new mission.