小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；简单句比重过高，另应加强复杂句的练习；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

I have a good friend. she is a beautiful girl. she has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. her voice is better. she is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. she is also nice. she often helps us . our classmates like her very much.Dreamed of growing up quickly,a girl wanted to be a teacher.