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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46205
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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Form the chart ,we can see that the degree of education may decide the pay.That is to say,if you have achieve higher degree of education your pay may higher. It is obvious that the degree of education you have achieved may deciede your pay in the future.However ,it is strang that the unempoloymentrate of the professional degree was lower than the doctoral degree's.So did the median weekly earnings.This is the first point that i have got form the chart.Secorndly,those people who accept education less than high school,and also they have gotten the lowest pay among those professions.Thirdly,those who have been achieved the degree lower than the associate degree the unemployment rat is higher than the average unemployment.For the salary,it seems a little different,because those weekly salary who have achieved associate degree islowerthanthe average salary. To sum up,we must achieve higher degree in order to earn more money.Then we can have a happier life.

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