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GRE写作Issue模拟题4:How To Use Public Resources

发布时间:2013-07-15 16:19浏览次数:757
要求:

Task Direction

"You will have a choice between two Issue topics. Each topic will appear as a brief quotation that states or implies an issue of general interest. Read each topic carefully; then decide on which topic you could write a more effective and well-reasoned response.

You will have 45 minutes to plan and compose a response that presents your perspective on the topic you select. A response on any other topic will receive a zero. You are free to accept, reject, or qualify the claim made in the topic you selected, as long as the ideas you present are clearly relevant to the topic. Support your views with reasons and examples drawn from such areas as your reading, experience, observations, or academic studies.

GRE readers who are college and university faculty will read your response and evaluate its overall quality, based on how well you do the following consider the complexities and implications of the issue organize, develop, and express your ideas on the issue support your ideas with relevant reasons and examples control the elements of standard written English.

You may want to take a few minutes to think about the issue and to plan a response before you begin writing. Be sure to develop your ideas fully and organize them coherently, but leave time to reread what you have written and make any revisions that you think are necessary."
 

Section Direction

Present your perspective on the issue below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views.

Question:

"As long as people in a society are hungry or out of work or lack the basic skills needed to survive, the use of public resources to support the arts is inappropriate---and, perhaps, even cruel---when one considers all the potential uses of such money."

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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

How to have a good interview As college students, we all have to face the truth that if we want to get jobs, we must have interviews. And it's very important for us to have good interviews. Form the interview, the employers will get much information about us. And they will decide whom they will employ. So when have an interview, we must prepare for it very hard. But how can we be successful in the interview? There are some aspects which are very important for an interview. First, we should wear official and clean clothes. And from our clothes, the interviewers will know whether we are serious or not. Second, we must be aware of our behaviors and words. Because the interviewers will know our skills that whether you are good at talking with people. Third, we should try our best to show our abilities and professional knowledge, so that the interviewers will depend on these things to know whether we are fit for the jobs. And the last but the least is that we must be confident. If we show that we are confident, the interviewers will have good impression on us, and we will get a better chance, too. In a word, I think the interview is very important, and confidence is very important to interviewees.

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