2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays, more and more people go shopping on online,while it has become popular and fashion way for people. For the go shopping on online,some people think the way has many advantage aspects because they are too busy to go to supermarket to choose goods. In addition, it is cheaper than the reality life.but other people do not think so, which bring many problems. people go shopping on online may be cheated because of artificial information, while your personal information may be lost. As far as i am concerned, i think that this is a great way to go shopping. For one thing,it is very convenient and you can enjoy the processes if you keep away artificial information. For another,you can not believe some advertise that it tell you can get some money or profit.i believe go shopping on online is a great thing and hope you enjoy it.