2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；文章词汇表达多样性不足，不过词汇拼写要再接再厉。

computer and man have many relationship.we all know that computer is one of tools for human being.computer is very useful for us.it can not only give many information ,but also help us learning.i like computer a lot. if we don't have computer ,maybe we still can't comunitate with each other convinent.and the world can't get thegether soon. however,computer is also bad for us ,if we don't use it in the right way.for example we are easy absored by many unhealthy information and just play computer game.beacuse of computer is a good way to make many new friends,so it is also unsafe for us to be friend with someone we don't know. computer and man can't apert form.we should make good use of computer.so we can use it to build a beatiful home.