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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

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nowadays computer play an important role in our life,it's being used in the army,in the office,in a word ,it's useful and for fun,student can use it to study ,to find some useful material on the line,on the other hand ,it's dangerous too,because there are so many people are use it for the wrong way,or depend on it too much,for example,a lot of people play too much computer games to study well,they are short-sighted, and a lot of people die suddenly in the bar ,they spend so much time and money in the bar and have little for their study,and to communicate with their family and their friends,they always alone in the bar but have nothing to do but waste their time,and there are also some unhealthful things on the internet,for example violence and porn,it's gravely damage the children's spirit and their health,so every corn has two sides,that depends on how you to treat it ,it will be better if you use it rightfully,but i will be worse if you use it in the wrong way,so if we human being take good advantage of computer,our world will be wonderful and peaceful.

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