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Recent years,the western festivals trend to more and more popular in China,especial for the young person.even some festivals are valued as more than the Chinese traditional festivals.such as Christmas. There are many reasons accounting for the outcome.The closer relationship of China and western countries is the strongest power which promote western festivals develop in China.In addition,the young people have enough time,and they are eager to appreciate the fresh feeling,the great differences between Chinese tradition have rather attractive for them.The third but not last,western country are intentionally spreading.With spreading their some culture,such as festival,the economic and society achieve qualitative leap. To some degree,the western festivals broaden Chinese life,and make people taste the different cultures.But the extreme popularity result in lost of the Chinese tradition culture.Nowadays,many our tradition festival was ignored by more people,the important reason is the invasion of western festivals.