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We have just had a class meeting on the topic-saving money. Through this meeting,we know that to save money is very important.Because we can learn how to control ourselves when we are trying to save our money. There are some tips for you to save money.First you can get a saving box so that you can put your money in.Second,you must try to make a list about what you need.Last,just use your money on what you need.Hope the tips may help you. Let's join the pas ...