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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33544
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分学术词汇;丰富从句的使用,文章会更出色;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

用户练习作文:

School is a place that many waste produce,such as,used paper,used envelope,plastic bottle,plastic bags and old cloth.Then,the next problem is how can we deal with the number of waste,in other words,what methods of recycling on college campus can we think out. Next I will analyze this problem in two aspect,one is in the short run,another is in the long run. In the short run,we can recycle these used paper and plastic in simple way.For example,we can turn these used paper and plastic into a elegant craft,and we also can hold some contests ,such as,Creative Competition .We can use the craft for auction,and we also can set up a smart shop to sell these art work or put them in internet for sale.Don't forget we still have some old cloth need to process.It seems that shopping is female's nature.Almost every schoolgirl have many clothes,however,in fact,some is redundancy.So how to handle with the old clothes become a big business for college student,specially for girls.The most simple idea is to contribute these old clothes to LRCS(League of Red Cross Societies),but have a more fashionable way to recycle these old clothes--transform old clothes into other things ,such as,some novel clothes for performance,curtian,rug and so on. In the long run,we can study other country's high technology way,we can establish a recycle plant,but the finance is a big issue,may be we can cooperate with other college.And we need to increase people's environmental consciousness,in this aspect,Japan have a good way,in Japan,consumer need to spend 10 yen deposit when they buy a beverage even in some vending machine. We only have one earth,I hope we can value it.We have to know that earth is not a gift from our parents,it is a loan from our children.

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