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作者词汇基础不错,在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;从句使用稍显不足,注意个别句子错误;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
School is a place that many waste generate,such as,used paper,used envelope,plastic bottle,plastic bags and old clothes.Then,the next problem is how can we deal with the number of waste,in other words,what methods of recycling on college campus can we think out. Next I will analyze this problem in two aspects,one is in the short run,another is in the long run. In the short run,we can recycle these used paper and plastic in simple way.For example,we can turn these used paper and plastic into a delicate craft,and we also can hold some contests ,such as,Creative Competition .We can use the craft for auction,and we also can set up a smart shop to sell this art work or put them in internet for sale.Don't forget that we still have some old cloth needed to process.It seems that shopping is female's nature.Almost every schoolgirl has many clothes,however,in fact,some is redundancy.So how to handle with the old clothes becomes a big business for college student,specially for girls.The most simple idea is to contribute these old clothes to LRCS(League of Red Cross Societies),but have a more fashionable way to recycle these old clothes--transform old clothes into other things ,such as,some bizarre clothes for performance,curtain,rug and so on. In the long run,we can study some developed country's way,we can establish a recycle plant,but the finance is a big issue,may be we can cooperate with other college.And we need to increase people's environmental consciousness,in this aspect,Japan have a good way,in Japan,consumer need to spend 10 yen as deposit when they buy a beverage even in some vending machine. We only have one earth,I hope we can value it.We have to know that earth is not a gift from our parents,it is a loan from our children.