2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

More and more goods is packaginged excessively.It will make goods become much expensive,so we have to use lots of money for this probrem.