题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
We genaration always like talk about an important word-trust at present.Everyone with different experience has different opinions. Some people hold the view that we souldnot trust anyone.The heart of people is ugly.The means we protect ourselves is only by trusting ourselves.About this view,I just think that maybe you are a selfish man.If you think everyone closed with you are taking purpose,you should think about youself first.Trust is happening in each others.But if you consist in your opinion,I have no question. Surely,other people thinks that the word is beautiful.The goodness is everwhere apparent.They trust everyone they knowed even if the people is only been known just one minute ago. About this word I just think we should not trust everyone.But we can express our trust on people closed with us.They are our silken treasure.We should expressour sinceration to the important people-friends,family,lover.