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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6292
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;文中有几处错误的句子,部分句子偏简单;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

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We generation always like talk about an crucial word-trust at present.Everyone with different experience has different opinions. Some people hold the view that we should not trust anyone.The heart of people is ugly.The means we protect ourselves is only by trusting ourselves.About this view,I just think that maybe you are a selfish man.If you think everyone closed with you are taking purpose,you should think about yourself first.Trust is happening in each other.But if you consist in your opinion,I have no question. Surely,other people think that the word is beautiful.The goodness is everwhere apparent.They trust everyone they known even if the people is only been known just one minute ago. About this word I just think we should not trust everyone.But we can express our trust on people closed with us.They are our silken treasure.We should express our since ration to the crucial people-friends,family,lover.

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