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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13015
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
评语:

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Today,more and more people feel anxious about the serious competition.Is it necessary of this competition?There are two different opinions about this problem.Some people think that it is necessary to encourage competition in modern society.They said that competition can make people to work hard and encourage company to elevate their efficiency and technic.All of this will make the progress of society.On the contrary side, some people think competition is not necessary, especially in our society.They provide the evidence that although the level of material life was elevated, people's emotion of happiness was descended. This phenomenon is due to the serious competition. As far as I am concerned, both of them are partly right.As every coin has two sides, competition bring both benefit and restraints.In modern era,we can not avoid facing various competition from outsides.As a individual, we have to compete with other person,and as a country, they must compete with other countries in the world. If we don't adapt to this circumstance, we will lose the chance to become successful or to become a strength country.However, it is not worth fuss about it, we should have proper attitude about competition.Too anxious about competition can not benefit anything.The only thing we should do is try our best to complete our mission and enjoy our life.

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