2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；行为稍欠流畅，过渡词用的还可以。

Creating a Green campus We all know campus is our another home which is important for us. What’s more,creating a green campus is best important for students’ life and study. Some think creating a green school essential factors are planting flowers,grass and trees.In fact, we need more do than that.green campus has not only green surroundings but also the atmosphere is alive and positive. What can we do for a green campus? First, we need clean surrounings which has these,flowers and grass.We shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere,spit spittle and so on.I take an example of seeing rubbish,then pick them up and throw into dustbin.Second we need atmosphere which is filled with smile languages and the sounds of reading books.Everyone on campus is friendly and helpful.Last but not least, respect for teachers and students each other.