2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；文中词汇使用较丰富，学术词汇使用要加强；请注意分段。

travel around the world is everyone's dream,we want to see the world in a different way,to broaden our horizon and to explore the world.what an exciting journey, nowadays,people in china go abroad to travel is popular,so many people admire that,why is that,to my opinion,everyone knows their country very well,so that is nothing new to them,they get tired of that,they fill with curiosity want to see something new,they want to go out and adventure,that makes them see more know more .such is human being,in the other hand,going abroad means that they have higher social position,that makes them feel good,but that also means that people have more and more money,people in china are become richer,china's getting stronger.good for china.lastly,i would like to say something bad about going abroad for travelling,why ,because going out gravely damage china's finance,for example,traveler must buy so much expensive staff abroad,and that cause china's finance going out and give other country a lot of money,the travel fee is also expensive.for example,recent years,chinese buy a lot of japanese things,that makes japan stronger,now japanese battle ships, bombs,fighters,rockets and all kind of weapons were built use the money from china,so,going out for travelling is decaying ourseles and stronger our enemy at the same time.it's a bad idea.