2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(18):节约型社会

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；缺少组织，上下文衔接欠流畅；请注意分段。

as a student,i think we should save our money for food. we all know, some person usual buy expensive cloths just for others‘ opinion at school. And also many people often forget close the water when they used it. If we save a little water, the world should less man dead as without water.