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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13013
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分66.5分
评语:

行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;采用了一些简单的从句;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

As we all know,the technology of the internet have changed everything in our life.I think the most part that be influenced is comunnication. First of all,we can find some people who are playing their mobile phone.During the trip of the work in bus,we cannot listen anything escept the sound of the phone.Secondly,most students of us prefer to play computer rather than talking with our parents. From my points of view,comunnication is the bridge betweeen my parents or friends with us.What is more,it is also a ablity that help to get touch with other person.Human is a special kind of animal that must live in a society.Therefore,however busy you are,please try to find some time to comunnicating with you parents or friends.

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