2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

语句间的衔接不是很自然；若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；学术词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇量稍小；请注意分段；副词使用偏多。

The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history,with the increasingly rapid the economic globalization and urbanization,more problems have brought to our attention.Nowadays,with the development of technology,people more and more use the compute instead of themselves.Not only communication with each other,but also do something.People always use the compute.