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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第46篇:是否每个人都有接受高等教育的权力

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:30浏览次数:3022
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

One argument states that higher education should be open to everyone, regardless of background. The opposing argument says that only the elite students should be allowed to proceed.

Discuss these ideas. Explain why.

是否每个人都有接受高等教育的权力。你的看法是?并给出解释。

字数要求:300字以内。

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请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。

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It is not exaggerating to say that people without high level education is just like the flowers without sunshine and fish without water. Everyone has the right to receive high level education. It is high level education that converts a raw people into a socialized person. By receiving education, people learns lateral thinking, critical thinking and becomes more intelligent. It is obviously that high level education can assert yourself into a respectful manner and promote social progress.

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