托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

" Snap judgments can never be trusted 。“ I agree with is statement . personal decision can be catastrophic if the problem is considerable . Making a determination without cautiously consider may affect the destiny of whole nation . Especially , when president or military leader deal with diplomatic issues. For example, president FDR is prudent when he decide weather to join the WWII . He arranged several meeting with congress and military leaders , revealed benefit and damage about the war, discuss the finance of the country . If he make a rush decision that fight the War , the country's destiny might be changed overall. We may still in the recovery of war now. For the history evidence , we can conclude that rush decision is irresponsible and may cause serious damage.