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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
文章用词太过单一，要仔细检查单词拼写；作者可适当增加词汇的丰富度，部分句子有错误；结构不严谨，行文不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Dear sirs/Madams: Hello! I knew your company's products when I participated the exhibition in New York from Dec. 15th to Dec. 22th.I am interested very much in your new product whose product number is 5670.I hope you can send a price list and instruction to us.I appraciate your help.I hope we can establish business relationship. yours sincerely HUbin
