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my opinion of money Most of our ,as student,are careful with our money in daily life.some people says we should save our money to pay attention to allowance when we buy something. In my view, we would't economize every times. cause you may lost more than you economize which you care about twofer. The reason why i say that some times you may be lost a lot is i have had the experience for wast my money. I remember that one day , i were give a rotten food form grocery just it cheaper . So, i can not buy economized for everything especially foods.
