- 分享到:
句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
I agree the statement.The number of cars is increasing.As far as I'm concerned,perhaps every family has one car.So cars is playing a very important role in our life.I'm not saying airplanes are not important,but cars have greater effects on society than airplanes. Firstly,cars are more convenient than airplanes.We can drive cars immidietly but we can't take airplanes in any time.If we want to take airplanes should buy tickets,go to airport,wait the boarding and so on.We can get on cars as soon as possible. Secondly,some place don't have airport.And then we must take trains or drive cars.Airplanes are not so usual in our life.Some people maybe have not take airplanes even once in their lives. Finally,cars may cheaper than airplane's tickets.If you just need to go out occationlly the tickets maybe more cheaper.For example,if you are a business man,you often go out to work,the cars gasline's cost is suits you than tickets' cost.
