小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I don't konw who is my best friend. I think to be a friend she or he must kind to me.love me and ready to help me in every sence.Good friend is the person who put up you from the hardtime. The person could share happness and sad.Finaly, she and me have some comment favriate