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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13046
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
评语:

学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;文章层次较为清晰;注意句式在文中的变化,加强一些从句的使用,文章会更棒;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Automobiles,as the product of modern civilization, have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of human society.It improve the society progress in the past tens years.Everyone knows the saying that transport play the most important part in development of economy.Automobile is one of the main transport tools,and it provide a convenient way for people to travel.The development of automobiles urge the redistribution of natural resource in whole world and incent other industry's develop. but automobiles have also given rise to series problem.There are two main problems, one is pollution,the other is traffic accident.The wast gas from running automobiles has become one of the main resources which induce atmosphere pollution.The results of this kind of pollution have emerged such as the warming climate,

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