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The Benefits of Volunteering It has been a tradition for Chinese people to help others since ancient times. Nowadays, tens of millions of volunteers from all over the world try their best to help those in need. It was reported that 4.5 million Chinese registered volunteers have spent no less than 4.5 billion hours to do volunteer work. There is no denying that volunteering will benefit us a lot. First of all,by taking part in volunteer work, we can build our personalities such as receiving the sense of achievement and confidence. Since volunteering is related to our interests, we will feel easy and get a lot of fun from it. After volunteering, it is no doubt that we will bring this attitude to life and work, and we'll finish all our work effectively. Besides that, we can expand our social circles for that we may get in touch with people from all levels during being a volunteer. It is a good oppotunity to make more friends. In addition, volunteering is good to our health. A researh indicates that people doing volunteer work will live longer than others. Through helping others, we can enrich our lifestyles and keep a good mood everyday. Being a volunteer is pretty glorious, only by helping those in need can we become confident, expand our social circles, and be in good health.
