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2008年专四作文真题:志愿服务的益处

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:40浏览次数:2446
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题目 The Benefits of Volunteering
说明 December 5th is International Volunteers Day. Since 1985, when the United Nations announced the special day, tens of millions of people around the world have volunteered to help those in needs. China now has 4.5 million registered volunteers who have provided more than 4.5 billion hours of volunteer work. What can you gain from volunteering?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用学术词汇;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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The Benefits of Volunteering It has been a tradition for Chinese to help others since ancient times. Nowadays, tens of millions of volunteers from all over the world try their best to assist those in need. It was reported that 4.5 million Chinese registered volunteers have spent no less than 4.5 billion hours to do volunteer work. There is no denying that volunteering will benefit us a lot. First of all,by taking part in volunteer work, we can build our personalities such as receiving the sense of achievement and confidence. Since volunteering is related to our interests, we will feel easy and get a lot of fun from it. After volunteering, there is no doubt that we will bring this attitude to life and work, and we'll finish all our work effectively. Besides that, we can expand our social circles for that we may get in touch with people from all levels during being a volunteer. It is a good opportunity to make more friends. In addition, volunteering to help others is essential for us to be healthy. A research indicates that people doing volunteer work will live longer than others. Through helping others, we can make our life more abundant and keep a good mood every day. Being a volunteer is pretty glorious, only by helping those in need can we become confident, expand our social circles, and be in good health.

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