2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online Shopping Nowadays,with the internet developing,people are fond of shopping on the internet.Online shopping become a fashion. Online shopping has some advantages,such as save the time,convenient，have many selects and save money.One the other hand,it has some disadvantages,it will be bad for our eyes,if we stare at computer a long time.And easily is cheated by the internet.Moreover,online shopping what bought the goods are fake. As far as I am concerned,online shopping has some advantages and has some disadvantages.But the advantages are more.It helps people's life,saves the time and money,offers many chooses to scan.