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Nowadays, most of us will look for group buy deals through the Internet in order to save money,or buy some beautiful clothes which are on discount.Opinions on this phenomenon differ from person to person.Some people think that it is something worhwhile while others hold that it do not save money trully.As for me ,I am in favor of the latter. we all know many advertisements which promote their cheap price on their product or food on the screen tend to induce your desire to buy things. We just think it is cheap so we buy it.Maybe the things we buy is useless or the food is not healthy. That is not smart behaviour in that it wastes our money. what should we do in this situation? wipe your eyes and thike twice before you buy things that are on discount.If it is aviable and helpful,you should buy it at once In conclusion, think deeply before we buy things.
