山东临沂市临沭县2012-2013学年高二下学期模拟试卷英语作文

建议作者增加过程性词汇的使用；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Thanks for you to invited me to have dinner with you in your home,but that day,I will have an important text in school so,I can't go to you home and have dinner with you.I will wish you have a happy day in that day and I hope can have dinner with you in other time.