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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46206
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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March7 is Girls’ Day, it is the day before Women’s Day, during the last decade, Girls’ Day has becoming more and more popular. In the school, the slogans are so interesting, these slogans are put forward by the boys, they are showing their praises to the girls. Like “Girls, you are the only wife that my mother pointed.” How interesting. Actually, the slogans are always praising girls in a humorous way. I like Girls’ Day, I will get a gift from the boys in my class, it is nothing with love relationship, only friends. In the street, I find the girls are so happy, some get flowers from boys, some get other presents.

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