Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;连词使用偏少。
Spring Festival is the most essential festival in China.It's to celebrate the lunar calendar 's new year.In my hometown, everyone needs to go home for the holiday. This year I have a happy spring festival with my family.On Spring Festival'Eve, I have a big dinner with my family. During the dinner,we talk about what happened in a year.The most exciting thing is that I get lucky money. After dinner,My father and brother go out to play. As for me, my favorite is watching the Spring Festival Gala. In the new year,I visit my relatives and friends,they changed a lot.We go to shopping together,the time seems back to the past,we are so happy. Thanks the spring festival,it makes our family people get together,and let our feel happiness.May everyone is happy during in the spring festival.