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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；连词使用偏少。
Spring Festival is the most essential festival in China.It's to celebrate the lunar calendar 's new year.In my hometown, everyone needs to go home for the holiday. This year I have a happy spring festival with my family.On Spring Festival'Eve, I have a big dinner with my family. During the dinner,we talk about what happened in a year.The most exciting thing is that I get lucky money. After dinner,My father and brother go out to play. As for me, my favorite is watching the Spring Festival Gala. In the new year,I visit my relatives and friends,they changed a lot.We go to shopping together,the time seems back to the past,we are so happy. Thanks the spring festival,it makes our family people get together,and let us feel the happiness.May everyone is happy at the spring festival.
