2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；文中使用了不错的从句，但需注意个别错误句子；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，学术词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误。

Nowadays,online shopping has becoming a style. As we know,everything has two side.It is significant for us to recognise it corectly.Being a 21-centure person,our life become more and more easy and comfortable .When we are shopping online,there are more choose to get the things which attract us.On the one hand,if this,we could stay at home the whole day not to go out with others,so that we will lack the best way to communicate with our friends or wolrd.On the other hand,we can't get esercise to make our be healthy. Consequently,as far as I am concerned,I hope online shopping become a part of our life,and we should do exercise every day.