2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；句式变化较丰富，若注意文中个别句子错误会更棒；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇。

Nowadays,with the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life. As we know,everything has two sides.It is significant for us to recognise it corectly.Being a 21-centure person,our life become more and more easy and comfortable .Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages,here consumers can buy almost everything they need.When we are shopping online,there are more choose to get the goods which attract us.On the one hand,if this,we could stay at home the whole day not to go out with others,so that we will lack the best way to communicate with our friends or world.On the other hand,we can't get esercise to make our be healthy. Consequently,as far as I am concerned,I hope that online shopping become a part of our life not the whole,and we should do exercise every day.