2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意。

With the development of the Internet,shopping online is becoming more and more popular nowadays.There is no doubt that shopping online has some advantages.First of all,it's quite convenient,we needn't go to the shops to buy the things,so we can save a lot of time.Second,we can usually get a discount when buying the product online.Third,there are many kinds of products on the Internet,which can meet our demands. Hower,shopping online,like other things,has some disavantages.The security problem is one of them.Sometimes we may get cheated.We have offered our money,but can't get the product we want.What's more,the product we recieve isn't the one we have ordered online.In addition,our personal information may be let out when shopping online. Anyway,in my opinion,shopping online is a trend and will be used by more and more people in the future.