2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Nowadays,many people are in unemployment troblue.And different degree have different unemployment and median weekly earnings.For example,the average of unemployment rate is 7.6 persent,the highest rate is 14.1persent and is the people who have less than high school diploma,the lowest rate is 2.5 persent and is the people who have the doctor degree.Just the same as the median weekly earings,it's average money is 797 dollors. Many people think is unfair.But you know,nowadays,the knowdegle sometimes decide the someone's ability and the role you play in the soial.However,the state goverment should try to devolop citizens knowdegle able.To build more pubilc school or adult school.Or to give more profit to the company so that they can provide wokers wage.And the goverment should know that the soial's demencory need a demencory relationship between wokers and boss. So,as citizen we also should develop ourselves. Remember everything decide of ourselves.