2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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We are familar with computer very much now. people invent them in oder to make them help us do a lot of things.so the computer are close connection with us.they bring a great deal of convience to our life and chang people 's value.we can chat with a lot of people all over the world on the Internet which expand our horizin and be good for our communication ability.as the same time,we can buy the goods that we need by the computer.on the internet ,we are able to learn a lot.However,the computer also cause a lot of problems.the teenagers are addicted to computer game rather than study hard.There are a lot of bad information spread in the Internet which are hurting people.thus we shuld think of the computer obejetively.